Sunday 11 September 2016

Descriptions of Goldilocks and Baby Bear


In Room 4 and 5 we have been learning how to write character descriptions. We have been using characters from different fairy tales, myths and legends.  Last week we wrote about Goldilocks and Baby Bear from Goldilocks and the Three Bears. To really understand the characters we were describing we made masks and pretended to be the character we were writing about.  Here are some examples of our work.

Goldilocks

Goldilocks is beautiful because she has a pretty dress and she looks like red riding hood. Her hair is blonde. She is sneaky because she went into their home and ate Baby Bears Porridge. I think goldilocks is naughty because she went into the house without knocking. I think she is greedy too because she ate Baby Bears porridge.

By Cane Green

All about Baby Bear

Baby Bear looks like a grizzly bear. He has fur and he always smiles. He has short ears. Baby Bear came back to his house and found out that his porridge was all gone. He went up stairs and found someone in his bed. I think Baby Bear was shocked because he wasn’t expecting to see someone in his bed.  I feel sorry for baby bear because Goldilocks broke his seat. I think he is nice because he is a good person. I like Baby Bear because he is cute and cuddly.

By Judah Hobson